Here is paragraph 2 again. Click on the video below to see the teacher make corrections.

As someone says, 'an increasing number of people do business across countries and continents, the demand will increase for a common tongue that can ease the process and promote greater business opportunities. Combining this with a process such as localization can be extremely beneficial for a business in expanding and reinforcing its commercial gravitas. Undoubtedly, it is such companies that are today enjoying greatest success in the market place.' I will also say that if everyone can speak the same language, then there will not be so many wars because countries would communicate better.